Chapter 18 Page 40
Originally I was going to show Michael talking to that very jaded grocery store employee, but then I thought “You don’t need to design a new Stranger” X’) Also this chapter is already long enough. It probably would have added another page.
Lots of good things on this page I like! I like the moth parent and child in the background of the first and fifth panel. I like the big temple on the hill in the third panel! I like getting to show Michael’s vampire smell skills in an interesting way in the last panel!!
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